Summary: A short poem about the pain of losing someone, but not being able to remember them, written from the perspective of Roxas after 358/2 Days.
POSTED on March 23, 2024
3 Comments
PoH
on March 26, 2024 at 9:46 pm
Your words are so vivid! You capture the setting and Roxas’ pain so well. I especially love the descriptions of Twilight Town’s quiet streets: “When the sun clothes the streets in the scarlet haze of dawn” and “When the darkened roads turn to midnight haunts.” It’s beautifully written.
i think this captures so well the feeling that roxas would get now and then when he remembered xion without remembering her. you have a very poignant way of writing and even though it’s short, i can tell every word is chosen so carefully. thank you so much for sharing this with us!
Your words are so vivid! You capture the setting and Roxas’ pain so well. I especially love the descriptions of Twilight Town’s quiet streets: “When the sun clothes the streets in the scarlet haze of dawn” and “When the darkened roads turn to midnight haunts.” It’s beautifully written.
i think this captures so well the feeling that roxas would get now and then when he remembered xion without remembering her. you have a very poignant way of writing and even though it’s short, i can tell every word is chosen so carefully. thank you so much for sharing this with us!
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